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his father smelt like office papers, faint notes of cologne, and the generation gap. like loss, grief, and he never got a chance to know you.

one year later, he stands in front of the gravestone, and all he can smell is marble, dust, and the stagnant beat of his heart.


his mother smelt like the family dog, flowers, and unrequited love. like cookies, warmth, and understanding is not the same as caring.

one year later, he holds his mother's hand in his, and he smells baby shampoo, true smiles, and love-that-never-left.


his ex-girlfriend smelt like sugar, strawberries, and a silent bomb. like chaste kisses, intertwined fingers, and we just don't fit together.

one year later, he bumps into her at the store, and a good whiff of her hits him, like youth, memories, and tugs on hearts.


his best friend smelt like unconditional loyalty, determination, and good-naturedness. like strength, vulnerability, and you've got my back, i've got yours.

one year later, they're sprawled on the grass looking up at the sky, and he gets a hint of faith, support, and belief.


you smelt like fresh spring rain, hope, and disappointment. like need, want, and please don't leave me.

one year later, he's found knee deep in his closet, fingers tight around an old shirt of yours, and he puts it to his nose. he breathes slow and deep, but all he can smell are salty tears, crumbled resolves, and regrets.
written for #theWrittenRevolution's contest which can be found here: [link]

result: prose runner-up.
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