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"we can't do this anymore. i'm sorry."

"but i still love--"

the phone line disconnected.

"y--you."

and there's nothing to be heard.

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it's sinful how they steal kisses from each other under thunderstorms and pounding hearts. as rainwater blends in with tears, they cling to each other as wet clothing clings to them.

"what are we doing?"

"i'd rather be cold and with you than warm and without you."

"we can't."

"yes we--"

thunder roared and he slipped away.

"c--can."

and the lightning blinded his heart.

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it hurts how the shine in his eyes hold everything but love.

it's okay, he tells himself. i've held on long enough, and it's time to start seeing straight.

he backs away from him and their tilting planet, and steps into a whole new world, complete with band-aids and a new-found hope.
written for the :icondevlit: competition: [link]

boy/boy pairing. (:

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tanya3286's avatar
omg!! at first i though this was a girl/boy thing...but then the ending really surprised me..!!
its so well expressed..ur symbolism and imagery is very sensitive...i found u thru the art viewer..n one work like this is enuf for me!! im :+devwatch:ing u :love::heart: