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out on the dusty roads paved all
over the face of the earth, death
ensued, red and fast.
when it was all over, black strewn
across barren land, love descended
in the form of salvation.
over the face of the earth, death
ensued, red and fast.
when it was all over, black strewn
across barren land, love descended
in the form of salvation.
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napowrimo; april 30th.
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This poems kind of paints a picture for me. It feels as if this is more of a story than just a fragment of time or maybe even a feeling. It has a wonderful, sort of rolling effect which makes it very easy to read both aloud and in the head, which, when paired with its diction, syntax and the assonance at the very last two line, fits perfectly.
Wonderful piece.
Wonderful piece.